Dancing Partner

Dancing Partner

Another New Studio

Started to move forward by framing some pictures, the first image ‘Jamie’s Flowers’ was longlisted for the Jackson’s Art Prize.

Dancing Partner

Jamie’s Flowers in C-View

Red Garden 5 in C-View

The second, ‘Red garden 5’ is probably not quite finished yet. I have a small VR environment for the Red Gardens,

It just takes the garden using a 3d background from Google maps and walks through to a 3d exhibition of the existing sculptures and back through portals to the red version.

I took some screen shots while I was in it and used one of them to start a new drawing.

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Screenshot from VR

Red Garden 6 17/04/24

Red Garden 6 22/04/24

And these next iterations show it on the 22nd at different stages.

Red Garden 6 22/04/24

After this I did a lot of thinking about where the end point for this work is and I’ve looked again at the theory around the ‘geranium project’ and the inherent dualistic approach I took there. I haven’t resolved that as yet but I ought to for the course I’m currently studying 

Red Garden 6 24/04/24

I worked the surface over more on the 24th, this is the stage where every drawing begins to lose something I think. I also made a small drawing on paper prepared with gesso after a discussion with Terry Chipp who has the studio above me at C-View.

Red Tree 24/04/24

I also spent an inordinate amount of time looking at this scene in the studio.

Studio 24/04/24

The ‘Dancing Tree’ sculpture is crying out for a dancing partner.

dancing partner

Red Garden 6 26/04/24

On the 26th I spent some time recovering the big drawing ‘Red Garden 6’ and added a small amount to the red tree

Red Tree 26/04/24

Finally I spent some time building the base for the dancing partner.

Studio 26/04/24 ‘Dancing Partner’ WIP

I’ve managed to keep up with 30works30days and made this short video of the 2nd second of each submission

Directionless Direction

Directionless Direction

Another New Studio


A trip around the studio on Friday 17th November 2023. This shows the “redfilm” [link] video in its new projection, then moves out of the booth navigating the “three red trees” sculpture and briefly views the three red garden drawings that had been framed at this date before showing the different lighting settings for the NHS lemniscate. The video looks at the comfrey torus and ends on the trees.

Directionless Direction

I took delivery of the frames for the new work on the 17th November and started to frame the existing work. Red Garden One is above, Red Garden Two and Red Garden Three below.

Directionless Direction

On the 18th I decided that the new iteration of the Redfilm should have statistics about the climate crisis, centred around global warming. I spent the day making the slides and inserting them into the film. The facts were gleaned from the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Sixth Assessment Report March 2023

Via World Resources Institute . The new film was entirely unconvincing and makes the whole concept somewhat patronising, so I dropped it.

On the 19th I found a review of Jewel Spears Brooker, T. S. Eliot’s Dialectical Imagination. Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press, 2018. 240 pages. ISBN 1421426528. [LINK]

In which the reviewer, Michelle A Taylor of Harvard University, comments that

“the “deception of the thrush” is that the “world of speculation” can be made real, that the objects of the mind could overcome physical objects, the reality of the body: so Eliot returns to idealism—…—and sees it for what it is. Like interpretation, speculation posits its own world, immaterial, with only some relationship to fact.”

I’ve ordered the book to more fully study this but the meat of it is what I’m exploring the edges of in this current set of work. The idea that the fact of making things as an artist removes from them the possibility of representation because they lack the contingency of design. I suspect that as I reach out for the chance to articulate this the art world itself has fully embraced the contingency of design as a necessary precursor to the creative act. When I was much younger and became a teacher I spent the first ten years of my career teaching design precisely because there are methods and, whilst you can make up the rules you follow, there have to be rules. In art, which I consider absolute, you can’t teach it you just have to do it. This is what I mean by Directionless Direction.

Directionless Direction

On the 20th I made some collages exploring the forms in the big red sculpture and the source for it, two of which are reproduced here. The one above was used as the basis of the bigger drawing discussed further on.

The next two photographs show the drawing “bigred” begun on the 22nd of November and made with inks and pastel.

Also on the 22nd I started Red Garden Four.

At the end of the 22nd it looked like this with the addition of the chainlink and the panel.

Directionless Direction

On the 24th November I added the fence posts and the bushes but decided the piece needed more definition. I added a wash of Indian ink and then painted the sky out with Titanium White oil paint.

I also continued to work on the “bigred” drawing.

Taking it through the stages illustrated above, becoming more like the collage as it progresses.

By the end of the 27th November the drawing looked like this, and the studio was beginning to be ready for the Open Weekend at the beginning of December.

Additionally on the 27th I published the first release of the “doncplatonic” app.

On the 29th I worked more on the “bigred” drawing and started another drawing based on a photograph by a local photographer  Jamie Bubb, with permission, that was posted to threads a day or two before.

I’ll post more of the open day in a separate post and also a more detailed accounting of the reason for it all.


I’ve continued to draw every day;

The November drawings can be seen here

and the October images here

There is a link to the previous month’s Gallery on each page.

The drawings are posted to Threads and Instagram each day.

Northern Digital Storytelling Festival

During March the first Northern Digital Storytelling Festival took place on line. The idea of a series of talks or discussions around digital storytelling was instantly appealing and I registered as soon as I could. I immediately encountered an issue when I saw the times of the talks, over lunchtimes (12:00-13:30) and early evening (17:00-19:30) which are just too awkward to contemplate. On the upside all the talks are recorded and available on the festival website and will be kept there apparently indefinitely.

I made a series of notes around some of the talks that I got the most from and I’m posting them just to keep myself on track with the gardens project.

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Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 10 – Interactive Digital Storytelling.

Narrative concentrates on the experience of the player in game terms, ludo-narrative dissonance occurs when the game play works against the character of the player in the game story.

Standard explanation of the way characters context frames the choices the players make in the game. What is the goal? \what happens if I get it wrong? Etc.,

Key insight is the provision of visual information, or any information, gives the player impetus to proceed or not, too much information can be boring, too little can be frustrating.

Context-Choice-Outcome Nina Roussakoff 

Most of the talks suggest the general storytelling works akin to theatre, and hardly anyone seems to regard books as immersive. [This is a little bit disingenuous of me]

Interactive media is in growth and non-interactive in decline? Strange declaration based on the fact that gaming business has exploded where film and theatre have declined over the last few years.

Bright Black talking about nudge based interactions, branching narratives where choice takes you somewhere different and everything is scripted. No room for emergent behaviour. Highly functional open worlds, like GTA, where emergent behaviour can be the entire of the experience. Speculative Design, make a story world with a question buried inside it. Good branching diagram possible, probable, definite, probable, possible reading down off a central line. Black Bright – 1000 conversations about death, a combined virtual and live experience. Sussex University research into perspective found that first person gives the least accurate perception of that space. Mapping from above might give a good opening perspective for an experience before you enter first person?

Book – Reality is Broken. Jane McGonigal

Is there really a huge exodus into virtual space? BB presenting an alternative to life?

The idea being to enter a ‘flow state’.

They were looking at multi-sensory immersion because they were not making games but were making experiences.

XR_Stories ‘Game Like Experiences’ what defines a game? Competition? Environments that invite play. Involving film as well as sound and 3d architecture. Theatre!!!

Uses mobile phone (provided to the audience – attached to the seat in front) to get a section of audience to vote at certain points in the narrative to provide direction. The phone then gradually becomes a director of the actions. Play-on.eu

Audience Q&A ‘was it real?’ was that experience really interactive? It takes work to persuade them that this true. Demonstrate the effects of decisions before they matter. Give evidence to prove this is the case. Be very heavy handed.

Branching narratives are easy but expensive – audiences experience are inevitably linear.

Why interactivity when the experience is linear.

Maintaining Game Balance, how to ensure selections are made equally, often choices are obvious through the text.

Magic Circle – rules are different here, Lusory Attitude and a playful contract. Games as transgression. Space for spectating (how do the audience choose to spectate rather than participate?).

Can the audience fail? How and when?

It occurs to me here that I made no note of what the actual piece was that these notes referred to and I’d need to rewatch the talk to find out.

Ben Kirman.

Analogue game called train – packing people into trains – presented without reference to it but clearly about the holocaust.

Psychological techniques to industrialise killing. Internalises the idea that we can all do wrong. Reminded me of a flash game I saw years ago where you were an American drone pilot trying to kill terrorists in an Arab village. Everytime you target the terrorists in the market place they walk away and civilians take their place, I can’t find it online anywhere.

Ben Kirman noticed that Theatre people solve problems, don’t think about what might go wrong, suck it and see.

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Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 13 extra

Samantha Kingston – Co-Founder of Virtual Umbrella – VR Director

Empathy in VR

Films that blend story and technology together so that you forget you’re in a headset.

Topic, children of alcoholics, personal experience. Made a passive experience in VR after losing her mother to stage 4 liver disease when a teenager. The space works through the stages of grief as if speaking to her mother. A set of 5 chairs around the room that speak to you when wearing the headset. Always important to ask why use VR? Is it about the way you – the audience – are addressed? What reaction are you expecting? The experience is not just about the headset, it’s about the whole experience.

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Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 13 – The Metaverse and Digital Storytelling – Empathy and VR

Richard England from Reflex Arc spoke about the lack of accessibility for blind, partially sighted and deaf people throughout the interactive media architecture and industry.

Josh Naylor from HTC Vive, for an immersive experience don’t give me an abstraction, give me something I know not a cue I need to learn.

Also talked about embodiment – make me walk in someone else’s shoes.

Lots of the potential solution are suggested as being entirely prosaic, showing recipes when cooking, seeing a screen of additional stats when watching the Grand Prix. etc.,

JN good explanation of AI – anything that has been done loads its good at, not innovation, so it will leave creators free to invent and innovate.

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Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 15 – Virtual Production and Its Place in Digital Storytelling.

VR Production at Production Park Wakefield has open entry facilities that are allegedly not expensive?

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Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 16 – Digital Storytelling in the Real World, AR and Overlays.

Damian Tomaselli, Post Doctoral Scholar, Visual Identities in Art & Design, University of Johannesburg.

Initially the idea is presented that AI functions as a kind of montage of the Real and Virtual with its own character. Eisenstein idea of montage.

Alice’s passage through the looking glass places her in VR, this side of the looking glass is Real Space (Physicality) so the mirror itself is AR if you can see through it to the other world.

Narrative will inevitably run slower in AR than in VR and agency is very different. AR can render the audience from passive to active, from observer to influencer. Ended with talking about Ludo Narrative Dissonance. The way you can miss the mechanics in games if you’re involved as a character, and you can miss the emotions you need through following the plot.

Warren Fearn. Using AR to teach primary sciences.

AR Wonderscope – Storytelling AR App. Indoor

Magical Park – NZ – Selling houses using AR. Outdoor

Merge 3D cube.

Teaching through storytelling, using videos, characterisation, narratives in the classroom. The manner of using the experience needs to be carefully designed for individual/group, spatial awareness, degree of individual agency, language.

Warren’s project is based around the platonic solids(?).

Collaboratively built app around climate change. Different features linked to a cardboard pop up exhibition.

Sound became very important in terms of engaging young people and giving a literal narrative.

Shreyans Jain – Vologram – Volograms will allow users to record a full body message and send it to someone through the app who will then be able to make AR content in their location.

Bethany Watrous from Experience Heritage – they make apps that use Location and Target to give you an animated character describing what you’re seeing.

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Durer’s Solid

Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 17 – Trans-media Digital Storytelling

Tomaselli – talks about how trans-media (which he says doesn’t really exist) works. Start with the difference between storyboard and comic, the latter is never intended to be real.

The ‘stage’ what are the compositional requirements, how does the space relate to the storytelling. Blocking etc., Tactics what are the rules of the world and how do they work as patterns and familiarise the audience with them? How do we teach them the role of the participant? Act 1 is the orientation phase, where rules are baked into the game and expectations are set. Once the audience knows the roles they can be undermined if desired.

Interactivity – always writes it with inverted commas because the terminology is too broad to work with the diversity of storytelling we now have. Each Character has different rules, how do we measure their development/ establish a distance so that we can build relationship with the character through interactions or movement. Working towards narrative character relationships through interactivity.

In transmediation the space is an actor, the theme needs to be spatialised. No space for clutter as overloading the senses with information means things, details get lost. Think about level maps in games (he uses Mario Bros 3 as an example). Used the 3 act heroic quest arc as a reference in previous talk. Agency of the user, interactivity, runs the risk of taking away from the things the narrator sets up and works against the story. When working with Mayfire(?) they worked on windows of animation within the comic they were working on, DC comics said let’s do an interactive comic. DC ended up creating an interactive story with multiple endings and it wasn’t what they wanted. The company had wanted to have just windows illustrating elements of one story arc.

Question on using user generated content to bring you in to the story?

Myra Appennah and Simon Wilkinson – BrightBlack. They do brilliant stuff and are well worth a look.

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Durer’s Solid – Ink & Chalk on Amazon Carrier Bag

Northern Digital Storytelling Festival 18 – Digital Story Telling with No Budget

Wayne Sables

What Kind of Film do you want to make? Documentary, Narrative, Experimental, Art etc., (Wayne did this in reverse).

Planning – Pre Production: Script/Storyboard/Treatment/Post It Notes/Beer Mat etc.,

What to Shoot off: Phone, Camcorder, Cinema Camera (Tangerine, won Sundance Festival, shot on 2 iPhone 5s)

You need a Crew/Cast (or do you?)

Locations and Release Forms. Release Forms – Get it signed. Free Resources Online. Storyblocks; Wayne’s Google Drive Folder. Can make or break your shoot.

Lighting: Lighting is the key to professional scene making. Natural Lighting, Existing Lighting, Hired Lighting, choose a style and stick to it.

Sound: Where possible use an external microphone. Blair Witch, Cloverfield are essentially sound pieces. Rule of Thumb the closer to source the mic the better the sound quality.

Shoot.Shoot.Shoot: Be well prepared, be decisive, be efficient, be productive. Know what you want to do and do it, shoot and reshoot.

Post Production: Editing -Software – Computer/Mobile

Storing Footage – back up, back up in the cloud. Learning resources, Online resources…

Da Vinci resolve has a good free version. iMovie, splice for windows,

Skillshare, Udemy, Vimeo on demand.

Ben Porter

Who, why, Journey, Test leading to Success or Failure – Home-Away-Home.

All stories are about transformation.

The story must move the audience closer to where they want to be. Always think about the audience, you create stories that resonate by reverse engineering.

Define your audience; the person who knows their audience most wins. Who is my audience, what do I want them to feel, what do I hope they take away from this. Set Deadlines

Simple Repeatable Project; do them regularly, set the parameters and follow them.

Spend your time making not thinking, establish consistency, consistency beats intensity.

5 tips

Find a network/ shared interests etc., reach out to them.

Start your own if you can’t find one!

Be honest: make sure you’re telling stories that are true to you. Be clear about what you want.

Be Grateful, thank people privately and then publicly,

Practice: Know who you are, have your own spiel,

These are the notes I made as I was listening, the talks were all good and I’d recommend having a look at them.